Ave Namoto (Im finished someone plz look over this!!!)

Name: Ave Namoto

Age:19

Gender:male

Village:formerly leaf

Clan:Namoto

Demon Curse Marks, etc:the demon sealed inside me by my family

Rank:Akatsuki

Summonings: I can summon a black wolf, that can fir ehellfire from its mouth.

Weapons:kunai, etc, etc,basicly all the standard ninja weapons

Appearence:look at my avatar


personality:ruthless and evil, determined to do whatever it takes to acomplish his goal. his personality is a rainbow, some times he can be a very annoying. soemimes he can be all serious. and sometimes he is just crying. but most of the time hes ruthless and evil.



Name:Magen • Jubaku Satsu
Rank:B
Description:Jubaku Satsu is a Genjutsu technique utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. After forming the needed hand seals, Kurenai will disappear and approach her target. Once near her target, a tree will grow at their feet and its branches will bind them so they can no longer move. Once the illusion makes them believe they are captured, Kurenai will appear from the tree itself and stab her target with a kunai.


Name:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu
Rank:D
Description:Narakumi no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away. Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion.


Name:Bunshin Bakuha
Rank:A
Description:Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.


Name:Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu
Rank:C
Description:Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu is a special Ninjutsu techinque used by the Leaf ninja Yoroi. After activitating the technique, Yoroi's hand will glow with chakra. When he touches his palm on his opponents body, he can withdraw the physical and spiritual energy out of them. By reducing their chakra, it greatly increases his advantage over his opponent.


Name:Dai Endan
Rank:-
Description:Dai Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire element. Jiraiya will first gather the fire into his mouth and then spew a giant breath of fire constantly at his opponent.


Name:Doku Kiri
Rank:B
Description:Ninpou: Doku Kiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Shizune. This technique allows Shizune to expel poision gas from her body. This can serve as cover to escape and as an offensive technique against her opponent.


Name:Housenka no Jutsu
Rank:C
Description:Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.



Name:Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank:B
Description:Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.



Name:Gouwan
Rank:Unknown
Description:Gouwan is a taijutsu technique used by Haruno Sakura. Using the skills passed down by her teacher Tsunade, Sakura is able to utilize powerful strikes. Sakura will first build up a high amount of chakra to her fist and then release it in an instant.


Name:Konoha Raiken
Rank: -
Description:Konoha Raiken is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Lee will spin to gain momentum and then lay a powerful strike into his opponent.


Name:Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank:A
Description:Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown shuriken.


Name:Utakata
Rank:unknown
Description:Utakata is a Genjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Uchiha Itachi. Itachi will start this technique by using only one finger on his right hand. His target does not have to look into his eyes, a glance at the hand itself will be enough. Once inside the illusion, he can control the visions the ninja sees. This illusion can also be used to play on the fears of the target, causing them to see and hear those who they care about degrade them.


Name:Chakra no Mesu
Rank:unknown
Description:Chakra no Mesu is a special Ninjutsu technique used by medical ninjas. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja will focus chakra to their hands. When their charged hands reach the body of their target, they can extend the chakra internally into the targets body to cut and neatly slice their muscles and blood vessels without harming the surface skin. This technique can be used in battle, but because of its hectic nature, the fine precision required for an instant kill is not feasible. Damage can still be done to the vital organs, but the technique should be used carefully in battle.


Name:Daitoppa
Rank:C
Description:Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.


Name:Gyorai Shin
Rank:unknown
Description:Ninpou • Gyorai Shin is a Ninjutsu technique used by the thief Gosunkugi. Removing nails from his pocket, Gosunkugi will throw them into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using his chakra the nails will travel into the ground. Then at his discretion, he can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of his target to nail them in place. He can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut his target to pieces.




Name:Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu
Rank:unknown
Description:Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.





Name:Suigadan
Rank:unknown
Description:Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.


Custom Jutsu:




Name:Black rose jutsu
Rank:D,C,B (it depends on how much roses come out of the ground and how much poison they release)
Description:Black roses come out of the ground instantly. they mostly coem out of the ground next to teh oponent,the roses then expel large clouds of poison. the poisons effects are paralyisis for 1 post if D rank. 2 posts for C. and 3 posts for B.




Name:Black chakra
Rank:The namoto clans kekki genkai
Description:the demon inside a member of the namoto clan will turn the users chakra pitch black. the users face will then become translucent revealing his skull. and the user will also get a scythe and grow claws and hover off the ground a lil bit. after the transformation is complete, the user resembles the grim reaper.



Name:Rain of fire
Rank:B
Description:the user sends so many tiny balls of fire at the oponent that it seems as if its raining fire.



Rain of 1000 senbon
Rank:Unknown
Description: bacily the user throws all the senbon he/she has and it all rains down on the oponent.




History/Background:The namoto clan practices an ancient religion. its an evil religion. once you turn ten you get a demon inside you. The demon is put into you with a special ceremony in which the whole family gathers around, the demon is from hell it is a true part of darkness,after the ceremony a black skull forms on the users chest. Ave has a demon inside him. his family got killed by his family's rival clan the uchiha, becuz the uchiha feared the namoto clan would become to powerful. Ave vows to kill all uchiha for the pain that they caused him.
Ave was traveling and then he ended up in hell and was trained by the devils then sent back to earth, they dint send all of him, they only sent his hate and rage and power back to earth, thus he became a very evil person with very little kindness. the little bit of kindness is being held down by the demon and dark energy inside him. but that lil bit of kindness wishes to be good but first he must kill the uchiha.


Role Playing Sample:As Ave lay down under a tree he fell asleep, dreaming about what he would do tomorrow. Ave woke the next morning, he then began to practice his justu. Ave got hit by several of his oponents punches, he coughed up blood as well. Ave made a few handsigns and shouted "Dai Endan!!!", then a stream of fire came out of aves mouth, going towards the oponent.

1.Explain your demon
2.You can't have Peins absortion technique

Hashi Hyuuga wrote:

1.Explain your demon
2.You can't have Peins absortion technique

got to my profile. thats what my demon looks like. basically a demon of darkness and hell

I don't care how it looks like tell me what it can do its abilitys etc

Hashi Hyuuga wrote:

I don't care how it looks like tell me what it can do its abilitys etc

and so yeah. the black chakra can give me a boost in power kinds like naruto's dmeon fox does to him. yknow his chakra gets all red, in my case my chakra turns black and once agin look at my custom jutsus. kinda hard to explain. look at my history/backgroudn story for just a lil more info.

Way too OP control the dead and undead?No.Too OP.I understand boosts of power but not the rest

kk so yeah ill take that out.

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Name:Resengan
Rank:A
Description:Rasengan was a ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. Like Kage Bunshin, Naruto would adopt the technique as a signature move and make it all his own. The technique is unlike other jutsu in that it does not require any handseals, it just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand which can cause much destructive impact.

Thus the technique was pure shape manipulation of chakra, unlike most elemental techniques which are shape and nature manipulation. Hatake Kakashi stated the technique was unfinished for this reason, as the Fourth Hokage did not get a chance to add some form of nature manipulation to it and it was even unclear whether it is even possible for an elemental nature to be added. Naruto dedicated himself to this task though, in the hopes of fusing his Wind elemental nature with the Rasengan's shape manipulation. He eventually succeeded after long and hard training, which took advantage of Kage Bunshin's memory absorption capabilities. He was able to finish the jutsu in the span of a few weeks what would have taken a normal ninja numerous years. The new Wind Element version was thus named Fuuton: Rasengan.

You cant have Rasengan

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