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Chakra :
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Name: Pendo Takoshima

Age: 16

Village: Konoha

Nicknames: White Shark

Ninja Rank: Jounin

Looks:
He has brown ruff hair, and blue eyes. He wears a white, and red robe. He is not tall, but not short.

Clan:
Takoshima Clan Info:
Name:Takoshima Clan
Members: Pendo Takoshima
Clan History:
The Takoshima Clan originated hundreds of years ago in the Mist Village. It was a powerful clan that soon unlocked very special, and powerful abilities. The clan grew so large and powerful that it caught the eyes of Akatsuki. The clan was slaughtered, and the only survivors were two people. One man, the other woman. They escaped to Konoha, and settled down there. The woman soon gave birth to the new leader of the Takoshima Clan. Pendo Takoshima. Pendo is currently one of the last 7 Takoshima clan members left.

Bloodline:
Name: Water Control
Users:Members of the Takoshima Family.
Description:This bloodline allows the user to control water.

Aquagan Lvl 1 (Description: This eye allows the user to control water, and Ice.

Aquagan Lvl.1 Unlocks the following jutsus

Ice Armor Jutsu
Type:Unkown, possible Ninjutsu.
Rank:B
Description:
The user's entire body is covered in a powerful rock hard armor that is
see through in the eye area, and can act on it's own to protect the
user from close combat by making spikes shoot out stabbing through the
enemy.

Water Hurricane Jutsu
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:B
Description:
The user forms the needed handsigns and is able to form a hurricane
made out of spiraling water and send it towards the victim.

Ice Coffin Jutsu
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Description: The user covers the victim in a powerful ice that can be used to crush the enemy at the users will.

Water Pulse Jutsu
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Definition:
When water is on any part of the victims body he can stretch it to
cover the entire users body making it easier to perform certain jutsus
like Ice Coffin.

Aquagan Lvl 2 (Description same as Lvl 1 except it also grants the user a massive amount of speed.)

Aquagan Lvl. 2 Unlocks the following jutsus.

Water Evaporation Jutsu
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Description: The user is able to make all the surrounding water evaporate into the sky.

Ice Drill Jutsu
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:B
Description:
A drill made of ice forms on the top of the users head as he is
englufed in an ice shield, and spins at a fast speed as he can fly
through the air striking an opponent or dig under ground.

Water Flood Jutsu
Type: A
Definition: The entire area is filled with water 20 feet tall.

Shadow Partner Jutsu
Rank:A
Description:
The user creates a physical clone that can utilize every jutsu the
original ninja knows. All poison, or harm done to this clone is not
done to the user when the clone is destroyed.

Ice Tower Jutsu
Rank: A
Description:
The user creates a tower made completely out of ice rise from the
ground over 20 feet tall. Then it shoots hundreds of kunais and
shurikans made of ice out all around from little holes in the tower.

Poison Mist Jutsu
Rank:B
Description:
The user spurs a deadly mist of poison through his mouth, if inhaled it
will stop their chakra flow first, then stop their heart.

Aquagan Lvl 3 (Same as level 1, and 2 except it also allows the user to generate chakra at a fast rate by rotating.

Aquagan Lvl. 3 Unlocks the following Jutsus:

Mist Body Jutsu
Chakra Use: High
Type: Ninjutsu
Description The user completely turns into mist and can turn back into their solid form at will.

Ice Canyon Jutsu
Chakra Use: High
Type: Unkown
Description: The user makes spikes made of hard ice shoot up all around him except where he is standing.

Hydro Blast Jutsu
Chakra Use: Low
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user shoots large powerful balls of water from the palms of his hands.

Ice Clone Jutsu
Chakra Use: Medium
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:
The user creates clones that are similar to shadow clones in every way
except they are made of ice, that has to be melted or blown up.

Family: none

Sensei of: noone yet

Personality: Pendo is very generous and almost always happy. He will protect his students with his life, and is a very powerful ninja. He trains a lot and is always improving his skills. His favorite food is ramen, and his favorite pet is a dog.

Elements: Water, Wind (Ice)

Special Characteristics:
Name:Wolf Demon named Regulus
Host Body:Pendo Takoshima
Description:Regulus
is a wolf demon who allows the user to heal faster than normal, gives them a massive amount of speed, and give him a massive amount of chakra, that some say
Regulus may even have more chakra than the Kyuubi. The chakra that
comes from this demon is not blue, but white. This demon is very
sinister and is always trying to break free from Pendo.

Skills/Specialties: Main:Ninjutsu Sub:Summoning

Summons:
Gamabunta
The giant toad is the boss of all the summoned toads.


Gamakichi
The personal summon of Pendo. Gamakichi is also the son of Gamabunta.


Demolisher Toad

Pets:
Name: Chance
Rank: Regular Dog
Description:
A Golden Retriever named Chance who is able to control water, and Ice.
It is said that this dog is a true member of the Takoshima Clan.

Name: Koji
Rank: King of Fire Dragons
Description:
A black dragon named Koji who has the ability to use fire type jutsus,
and can fly at a soaring speed of 350 miles per minute at most.

Name: Toji
Rank: King of Water Dragons
Description:
A white dragon named Toji who has the ability to use water type jutsus,
and can fly at a magnificent speed of 400 miles per minute at most.


Jutsu:

Name:Kugutsu no Jutsu - Puppetry Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description:Kugutsu
no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to use a puppet to
attack from afar. Using their body's chakra, the ninja emits strings of
chakra that run from their fingers to the puppet. The puppet itself can
be loaded with many weapons and tools, allowing the puppet master to
remain hidden while the puppet moves and attacks the target.

Name: Takoshima Ultimate Defense
Type: N/A
Rank: A
Description:
The user creates a dark black force field like barrier around himself.
If anyone touches it they will be severly injured. it cannot be broken
or stopped. This jutsu lasts until the user dies, or he de-activates
it. The only way around the barrier is there is the barrier does not
block from the ground.

Name: Ground Decapitation Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Description:
The user blows a dark shadow from his mouth that will cover every bit
of the ground within a 2-8 yard radius. It can not be broken through.

Name: Animal Resurrection Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Description:
The user can bring any animal back to life by giving up a large amount
of demon chakra. The animal being resurrected has memory of their past, and are just like they were before death.

Name: Shadow Copy Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C-B
Description:
The user can make an actual copy of any object, or creature. The copy
can do anything the original can do, except it will be destroyed if hit
2 or 3 times. If it is an object copy, object copies that are made of
metal will take 4 to 6 hits, and all other will take 4.

Name: Ice Bullet Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description:
The user is able to spit large bullets made of ice harder than iron.
When inside the person or object being hit the bullet will explode
destroying it or them.

Name: Water Barrier Jutsu
Type: -
Rank: C
Description:
The user creates a barrier around himself blocking all fire and water
jutsus. All weapons and other element jutsus are not blocked.

Water Teleportation Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: The user creates a puddle below him or multiple people and teleports them to any location.

Name: Oodama Ice Barrier Jutsu
Type: -
Rank:A
Description:
The user creates a powerful barrier all around him that can withstand
fire attacks that are B rank and under. It is also said that this is
the only defense against Water Implosion Jutsu. This jutsu can hold up
to 4 people, and also protects from the ground.

Water Implosion Jutsu
Rank:S
Users:Takoshima Clan.
Description:The
user forms round sphere in his hand made of water with spikes around
it. The user then hits the ground with it destroying everything within
a 2 mile radius. Also kills the user if he is within the radius.

Water Form Manipulation Jutsu
Rank:A
Users:Takoshima Clan
Description:The user can manipulate his body to shift or change like water.

Ice Typhoon Jutsu
Rank:S
Users:Takoshima Clan
Description:The
user traps the victim in a skin of ice making him frozen solid as he is
lifted off the ground and thrown towards a desired spot.

Oxygen Inhalation Jutsu
Rank:S
Description:The
user sucks in all of the oxygen around him, making it impossible for
the victim to breath. The inhaled oxygen can be used as an attack.

Ice Dome Jutsu
Rank:S
Description:The
user creates a dome made entirely of ice around the battle field that
also goes underground stopping anyone except the user from escaping.
The user can walk out through the walls of the dome.

Spiked Ice Dome Jutsu
Rank:S
Description:The Ice Dome forms spikes on the inside and begins to shrink and enclose on the victim.

Ice Protection Jutsu
Rank:S
Description:Ice acts on it's own to protect the user from any incoming attack.


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Character sheet
JUTSU LIST:
Chakra :
Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Left_bar_bleue100000/100000Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Empty_bar_bleue  (100000/100000)
Blood:
Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Left_bar_bleue1000000/1000000Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Empty_bar_bleue  (1000000/1000000)

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Shadow Clone Jutsu
Description:Kage
Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the
scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin
technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The
Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and
creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also
utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally
disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the
original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an
excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and
stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time.
This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train
and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with
Tajuu Kage Bunshin.
Rank:B

Kai(release)
Description:Kai is a
Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a
Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu
technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the
technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack.
After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected
to end the affect of the spell.
Rank:Unkown

Water Prison Jutsu
Description:Suirou
no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an
opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the
water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only
allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching
the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken,
the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a
bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow
for a clone to attack others nearby.
Rank:C

Water Dragon Jutsu
Description:Suiton
• Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water
Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a
column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then
strike their target.
Rank:B

Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu
Description:Tajuu
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is an advanced variation of the Kage Bunshin
Ninjutsu technique which was banned by the First Hokage. This has not
stopped many Jounin-level ninja from learning the technique however.
Instead of creating several clones, several hundred clones are created.
Like normal Kage Bunshin a ninja's chakra is split evenly among the
clones when created.

The clones themself can utilize any jutsu
the original ninja knows. When the clones finally disperse, any new
knowledge they have gained is passed back to the original ninja and to
any additional clones. This makes Tajuu Kage Bunshin an excellent
training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to
maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows
the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn
with each clone added. With the great number of clones in Tajuu Kage
Bunshin, the ninja can effectively learn in a few weeks with a hundred
clones what would take one ninja numerous years.
Rank:A

Shadow Clone Explosion Jutsu
Description:Bunshin
Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first
glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can
detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.
Rank:A

Water Minion Jutsu
Rank:N/A
Description:
An exact copy of the user falls out of his body and is like a shadow
clone except when struck it turns into water, and when it uses a jutsu
it does not take chakra from the user, but from itself only. When the
clone is destroyed the knowledge it gathers goes back to the user.

Water Takeover Jutsu
Rank:S
Description:The
user creates a puddle under the victim, the water sinks into their feet
and allows the user to control their every move, and listen to their
thoughts.

Hidden Ninja Jutsu
Rank:S
Description:The user
can not be seen, heard, smelled, or even noticed. While using this
jutsu, the user cannot use a jutsu except Oodama Chidorengan while
using this jutsu, but anything they are holding is also invisable.

Ice Kingdom Jutsu
Rank:S
Description:The
user creates an entire kingdom of castles made of ice. This kingdom is
full of traps and secrets created by the user. The kingdom can be
changed or morphed by the user to fit his needs.

Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Description:Shuriken
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to
create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown shuriken.
Rank:A

In the first, the puppet
will expel a hazy orb from its mouth which can be thrown. While flying
through the air, the orb will lose it's haze and grow in size to a huge
gaping beast-like head. The large teeth can grab ahold of the person it
hits and pin them to a wall. Once the it impacts the wall, it will
immediately release the seal onto the surface.

In the second form, the main puppet will expel the seal from its mouth onto a surface it is touching.

Name:Fuuja Houin - Evil Sealing Method
Rank:A
Description:Fuuja
Houin is a Fuuinjutsu technique used to counter-act the effects of a
cursed seal. The ninja writes the needed seal characters on the ground
and body of the person cursed with the seal. The ninja then forms the
needed hand seals and places his hand over the cursed seal and then
activates the written seal. The seal characters will then retreat to
surround the cursed seal in a circular seal. Though the Fuuja Houin can
work well against lesser seals, it will not be able to fully stop a
cursed seal placed by a powerful, skilled ninja.

Name:Magen • Narakumi no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing Jutsu
Rank:D
Description:Narakumi
no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a
horrifying vision. The ninja will use the serpent hand seal to cause a
circle of leaves to spin and envelop the target and then fall away.
Once cast the world will appear normal to the target until they see the
illusion.


Name:Nehan Shouja no Jutsu - Temple of Nirvana Technique
Rank:A
Description:Nehan
Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place
a large body of people into a unconscious state.

Name:Gogyou Kaiin - Five Elements Unseal
Rank:A
Description:Gogyou
Kaiin is a Fuuinjutsu technique used by the Leaf Sannin Jiraiya.
Jiraiya forms an elemental unseal on each of his fingers, one for each
of the follwoing five "elements": water, metal, earth, fire and wood.
He then applies his hand with force to the Gogyou Fuuin to remove it.

Name:Coarsing Blade
Rank:S
Description:If
anyone besides Pendo holds this sword it absorbs your chakra the longer
you hold it. The Kyuubi's chakra can be manipulated into making the
sword sharper and stronger.

Name:Tsunami Jutsu
Type:Genjutsu
Rank:A
Description:The
victim of this jutsu is hallucinating that he/she is being drowned in a
giant Tsunami in the ocean when they are not. They lose stamina the
longer they try to escape from the Tsunami until they realize its an
illusion.

Name: Water Rabbit Jutsu
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:Water
Description:A
rabbit made entirely of water is created by the user. That rabbit can
shift its body to avoid being blocked or hit. When hit by this rabbit
it absorbs into your skin stopping your chakra flow for a limited
amount of time.

Takoshima Combo
Type:Taijutsu.
Rank:S
Description:The
user makes 10 shadow clones. The User then kicks the opponent towards a
shadow clone and they kick the opponent to the next shadow clone, and
so on. Once a shadow clone kicks the opponent, the shadow clone
disappears. When the last shadow clone kicks the opponent he kicks him
towards the user and the user finishes it by punching the opponent in
the stomach.

Name: Frost Bite Jutsu
Rank: B
Description: The victim is covered in a thick layer of ice making them unconscious.

Name: Water Army Jutsu
Rank: B
Description:
The user creates 30 clones made of water behind them that run with
great speed at the opponent. The clones crash into the victim as a
group suffocating them.


Name: Ice Bullet Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description:
The user is able to spit large bullets made of ice harder than iron.
When inside the person or object being hit the bullet will explode
destroying it or them.

Name: Water Barrier Jutsu
Type: -
Rank: C
Description:
The user creates a barrier around himself blocking all fire and water
jutsus. All weapons and other element jutsus are not blocked.

Name: Oodama Ice Barrier Jutsu
Type: -
Rank:A
Description:
The user creates a powerful barrier all around him that can withstand
fire attacks that are B rank and under. It is also said that this is
the only defense against Water Implosion Jutsu. This jutsu can hold up
to 4 people, and also protects from the ground.

Name: Ice World Jutsu
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: B
Description:
A powerful Genjutsu that traps the victim in a place where there is
nothing but Ice surrounding them. The user can manipulate the ice to
however he wants. The jutsu requires no handsigns but only needs the
victim to be touching Ice.

Used in conjunction with his Kusanagi sword, the blade becomes almost
unstoppable. It takes on Chidori's natural ability to cut through
anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to strike its
target with ease. Should the sword strike a human, the charge will
cause the target to go numb, lessening their ability to further counter
his attacks.

Name:Daibakuryuu no Jutsu - Great Exploding Current
Rank:-
Description:
Suiton • Daibakuryuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the
Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a vortex of water will
form, sucking anything on the surface above it down to the depths below.

Name:Goshokuzame - Five Sharks Eating
Rank:Unkown
Description:
Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water
Element. Pendo will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand
to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge
from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water
below.

Name:Mizu no Tatsumaki - Tornado of Water
Rank:Unkown
Description:
Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create
a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a
barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to
knock an opponent unconscious.

Name:Suigadan - Water Fang Projectile
Rank:Unkown
Description:
Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element.
The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water
to form a spinning drill.

Name:Suijinheki - Water Encampment Wall
Rank:Unkown
Description:
Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water
Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then
proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water
barrier from incoming attack.


Weapons:
Name: Takoshima Blade
Description: This blade is very powerful and can not be broken because of the powerful material it is made of. It is currently unknown when it originated but it is known that it was made by the Takoshima clan and is one of a kind. This blade has special abilities such as: When anyone except the owner touches the handle their chakra immediately begins to be sucked into the blade, spikes will also shoot out from the handle when anyone but the owner touches the handle.

Takoshima Armor
Description: This armor is very powerful and invincible, it is made of the same unknown material that the Takoshima Blade is made of making it very powerful. It has been enhanced to the point where it protects the user from lightning and lightning type jutsus. When the wearer is in battle this armor will cover his entire body making the eye area see through. Pendo wears this armor under his robe, when Pendo does activate this armor his robe is sucked into it for storage while the armor protects Pendo.


History/background Story: Pendo has been alone
his entire life. His mom died shortly after he was born, and his dad
was killed in the Takoshima Massacre, he was able to get his only son
Pendo to safety in Konoha before he was killed. Pendo grew up alone but
had many friends, he lived in an orphanage until he turned 11 when he
became a Genin, and used the money from missions to pay for an
apartment. He soon passed the Chuunin exams with flying colors amazing
the judges with his great skills in Intelligence and Ninjutsu. He went
on many missions and after a few years he was appointed ANBU by the Hokage, he has been through a lot in his life and after joining Akatsuki, but changing his ways he returned to Konoha and became a highly skilled Jounin.


Rp Sample: Pendo strolled through the desert, trying to get away from all of the paperwork had been getting lately. The sun was extremely hot as it glistened off of the few sweat drops flowing down the cheek of Pendo's face. The clouds in the afternoon sky flowed past the sun as the shadow drifted over Pendo, allowing him to feel coolness for a slight second. There was a sudden breeze that made Pendo know someone was out there. "I know your out there." Pendo said looking over to the group of sand dunes to his left.

Suddenly there was a flash of lightning that struck right in front of Pendo forcing him back. He was not seriously injured but a bit scraped up. "Nice try." Pendo said as water rushed through the dessert. Pendo then jumped into the air on to the glistening, wavy surface of the water. The ninja Pendo had seen before was now visible, and was snickering about something. "I don't have time for you." Pendo said as water began to wrap around the ninja. "The name's Keinshan." the ninja said as he exploded with fire, evaporating the enclosing water around him. "and I'm not going down that easily." he said grinning devilishly. Pendo laughed as he disappeared into a rather foggy mist. The Keinshan looked around hastily, a little terrified at the fact that Pendo could not seen. In the ninjas hands were balls of fire that he quickly fired in all directions. The fire was moving fast, and powerfully towards Pendo. He had few options considering the speed of the ball of fire, but immediately knew what the to do. As the fire was about to hit Pendo, a ball of water engulfed it extinguishing the threat.

The drops of sweat on Pendo's wet, hot face began to disappear as he was beginning to hydrate slowly. "Come out, come out where ever you are...Kazekage-kun..." Keinshan said looking around. He instantly heard noise coming from his left and attempted to dodge it, but it was too fast. Before Keinshan knew it there was a sword stabbed through his stomach. "Don't mess..." Pendo said ripping the sword out. "with the Kazekage..." he finished putting the sword back on his back, as the mist drifted off slowly disappearing. 'What a day...' Pendo thought as he began to walk back to the village. He was a bit banged up, but was in good enough health to make it back to Suna.
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Age : 30
Location : Konoha

Character sheet
JUTSU LIST:
Chakra :
Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Left_bar_bleue100000/100000Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Empty_bar_bleue  (100000/100000)
Blood:
Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Left_bar_bleue1000000/1000000Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Empty_bar_bleue  (1000000/1000000)

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PostSubject: Re: Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM   Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Icon_minitimeMon Jul 14, 2008 5:49 pm

1. You can't have puppets and the Aquagan. One of them has to give.

2. You forgot to add your clan's history.


Other than that, it looks good enough to be approved.
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Chakra :
Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Left_bar_bleue100000/100000Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Empty_bar_bleue  (100000/100000)
Blood:
Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Left_bar_bleue1000000/1000000Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Empty_bar_bleue  (1000000/1000000)

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PostSubject: Re: Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM   Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Icon_minitimeMon Jul 14, 2008 6:28 pm

fixed it
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Age : 30
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JUTSU LIST:
Chakra :
Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Left_bar_bleue100000/100000Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Empty_bar_bleue  (100000/100000)
Blood:
Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Left_bar_bleue1000000/1000000Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Empty_bar_bleue  (1000000/1000000)

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PostSubject: Re: Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM   Pendo Takoshima [Approved]- GM Icon_minitimeMon Jul 14, 2008 6:36 pm

Approved.
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